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GEORGE BOLEYN - Tudor Dynasty Series, Book 1
September 8, 2011
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Milady12
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After some very serious thought, I have decided that my next book is going to be about George. I am starting it today. I had planned for the first 6 books in this series to be about the 6 Queens, however after careful consideration and of course reading the posts here and elsewhere about George…..it is time. Time for George to have his day. A book where he is not a peripheral character, but the main one. It will be a work of fiction and I will do my best to do him justice. To portray him as the charming, charismatic courtier and loyal brother that he was. Wish me luck! I will keep you all posted about the progress. Also if you have any comments, suggestions or thoughts about the book please post them here. 

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September 8, 2011
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Anybody who can portray George accurately and in a positive light gets my blessing. Good luck with it!

September 8, 2011
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Unfortunately there is not as much factually documented history about George out there as I would like, so I will have to take some creative license with the story. However I have made up my mind that any license I do take in creating his story will be positive. That is a promise. I do not yet have my masters in History, much less a PhD so I am not yet a Historian, but a History student working towards a degree will will give me that title. In the mean time I will diligently research and do justice to the title I will one day hold, so as to be respected in the field that I respect so much. In the mean time I shall be a historical fiction writer and hopefully one worth her salt.

Kimberly

September 8, 2011
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All i ask to not to encourage the homosexual rumors and the incest….please.

But same as Louise said, anyone who tries to portray George correctly most certainly gets my best wishes. 

Good Luck to ya! Laugh

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September 8, 2011
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Well the incest is utter nonsense! As for the homosexuality…I have already figured out how I am going to get around that angle…without making him gay but also without offending the homosexual community. I am considering posting the first chapter and the first chapter only…to give you an idea of where the book will go. Then I shall leave you all in suspense….

 

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September 8, 2011
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Good luck.  I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with. Laugh

September 8, 2011
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Milady12 said:

Well the incest is utter nonsense! As for the homosexuality…I have already figured out how I am going to get around that angle…without making him gay but also without offending the homosexual community. I am considering posting the first chapter and the first chapter only…to give you an idea of where the book will go. Then I shall leave you all in suspense….

 

Kimberly

Well i'm very eager to see how you get around it.

And in suspense we shall be… : )

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September 8, 2011
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I decided instead of posting Chapter 1…. I would post the Preface, which I just finished (rough draft, still needs polishing but you'll get the idea). So here it is and we're off! I hope you like it!

 

I was born for greatness. I am a male of the Howard line. I have everything to play for and I am well equipped for this
 game. I will achieve glorious things in my tragically short life. I will rise in power and prestige. I will be given position
 and title. I will run in the very highest of inner circles. I am devilishly handsome, bright and charismatic. I am the 
consummate courtier. Perhaps they are these very traits that also brought about my downfall. 

I was born into a great family, the Howard family. We shall prove to be one of the most powerful and ruthless families
 in England, much to my pride and chagrin. We Howards play the long game. We play hard, we play smart, we play
 to the finish, we play to win. We are players in the Greatest Show on Earth....The Tudor Court. A place where people
 come from far and wide just to watch us dine. We costume ourselves in finery, we dance, we flirt, we turn a pretty 
phrase. Just another act in this traveling English show. A show that includes Seymours and Culpeppers and Nevilles. 
Each family performing their own piece of the show, while grabbing for the brass ring. We are just puppets, pretty 
puppets and I, I am a pretty Howard puppet. Mark me well, there is only one puppet master in the Howard family. 
That master is my Uncle, Thomas Howard, Duke of Norfolk. He moves us about the court as if it were a giant chess 
board and we, his family, were pawns. As a male pawn, I know I am being groomed to eventually be a puppet master
 myself. But I know, deep within me, that I cannot. Not because I am lacking some essential trait required to rule this
 family. No, it is because I have something extra. Something that will prevent me from doing the things that must be 
done to catapult us forward. That extra something is a heart. 


Don’t get me wrong, onward and upward is a motto I can get behind. It is the over and on top of I have trouble with.
 The relentless and ruthless crushing of anyone and everyone who gets in our way that gives me pause. But most of
 all, it is the basic nonsensical belief of most men in these times that women are to be used as a stepping stone for the
 men to further their own aims. Not to be loved, cherished or treasured. But to be used as currency, brood mares and
 bargaining chips. Admittedly I was raised with this idea and perhaps I have not always dealt kindly with those who
 have gotten in my way, but I dearly loved my sisters Anne and Mary. While I could swallow the idea of them being
 pushed onto the stage with me, to dance the dance of the Howards, I could not bear the thought of them being 
pushed off stage and into the breech when the music was done. 
And then, there was Francesca. 

But I digress. I play my part and I do it well. Better than well. I am stunningly good at what I do. What do I do you 
may wonder? Why I am a courtier, in the court of Henry VIII. I am loved by many. By kings and queens, men and 
women, children and animals. As I said, I am beautiful, I am witty, I am charming. I am, in short, a Boleyn.

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September 8, 2011
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I like it so far : D Good job. 

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September 8, 2011
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I love it! I'd really like to read more. Good luck with this, it's fantastic so far Smile

September 8, 2011
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This is off to a really good start, especially the last paragraph, which I loved!

All the best for your book – and if you feel like posting more, I'd love to read it!!!!!!!!

September 9, 2011
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Thank you. This is a VERY rough draft. I will change the wording at least 10 times before my editor gets a hold of it. However I wanted to get the basic persona of George down on paper as it were for the preface. Plus there were certain lines, especially in the first and last paragraphs that came to me that I definitely wanted to use and needed to get them down so i wouldn't lose them. But overall, considering the migraine I was battling yesterday, not a bad start.

Kimberly

September 9, 2011
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I like that the story is being told by George.  Very nice.  Keep plugging away.  Sounds great.

September 9, 2011
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Yeah i don't think there is books completely for George. This will be a first. There's Mary Boleyn and Anne Boleyn but no George Boleyn. He's just mentioned at the end with Anne gets arrested and all that fun stuff. 

You know what else would be nice? A story being told by Elizabeth Boleyn, Anne's mother. She was in the background too and we don't know much sooo and Elizabeth wasn't ever mentioned once in The Tudors which was a little wrong & confusing. There's another idea for ya. 

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September 9, 2011
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But then we'd have 2 Elizabeths….if 2 Princess Marys were confusing just think of all the Elizabeths had could addle our little brains…Embarassed

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September 9, 2011
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Anyanka said:

But then we'd have 2 Elizabeths….if 2 Princess Marys were confusing just think of all the Elizabeths had could addle our little brains…Embarassed

Yeah but if you title it specifically for this Elizabeth then why would it be confusing? Put 'Elizabeth Boleyn : The untold story of a Queen's mother' or something like that. If they put Mary Tudor : Queen of France for Henry's sister and Mary Tudor : Daughter of a King or Queen of England. 

Granted the title would be longer but still. This is what i'd do but that's me . I don't think Elizabeth should be held in the dark. Phillipa Gregory brought Mary Boleyn out of the shadows in her way, why can't Elizabeth Boleyn have her part told too? 

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September 9, 2011
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Just slightly off topic, is anybody else getting wierd formatting fo rthis thread where the writing on the right hand side gets cut off? Even compatibility mode hasn't helped me be able to wierd what seems to be a great preface of the story.

September 13, 2011
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I am, too, Bill, but just in this thread.

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September 14, 2011
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I noticed if I pull this read up on my phone it look swonky. But it is OK when I look at it from my laptop. I am sorry guys. EmbarassedFrown

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